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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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This is a song I wrote a couple years ago, but didn't get to master it before now. I went for a Tim Myers vibe ("Technicolor" album), as I wanted to see if I could pull off an upbeat song with appeal for film/tv. I wonder what you think, how do you like it? Imagining ThingsImagining Things©2012 Magne Kolstad Is it me or is it you Who owns the feeling What is the truth How can we know Will you make a move Why do I worry what tomorrow will bring Is it you Or am I imagining things Imagining things Wonderful things Oh oh I have to try, if only once To see if it’s real Life will run on In worst case nothing In best case love I’d love to do something to mend your world But is it just me Or am I imagining things? Imagining things Wonderful things Oh oh I can taste our kisses in the sunny park I can hear us swimming in deep blue water I can see us climbing to the top of the world I can touch the stars through your sweet love So, I need to know, this can’t go on I’ll show you my scars Will you tell me yours Let’s take it outside Not fight it indoors I want to see your eyes go and outshine the sun Or is it just me Am I imagining things Imagining things Wonderful things Oh oh Imagining things Imagining things Wonderful things Wonderful things
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Hi Magne:
Mission accomplished! Well done!
----Dave
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Hi Magne,
I'm loving your vocals lately. Kinda McCartney-esque. So relaxed in that vocal area up there a note or two shy of where the voice breaks.
I think in the bridge you could experiment a little with the vocal sound, cuz they feel like they are getting overwhelmed a tad by the music. Maybe some McCartney-esque screamed harmonies?
I love the sound and production. The bells and bellows are wonderful together.
Mike
Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 05/11/17 04:21 PM.
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon) from the song "Songs of Love" from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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Magne!!
Hello friend! I just LOVE THIS! So sweet and upbeat! I enjoyed the vocal and production, great song and so happy to be listening to you again!!
Tammy
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Thanks Dave, Calvin, Mike & Tammy! Good ears, Mike. I can hear what you are saying, it's an older mix, and the rhythm electric is a bit overpowering in places, especially in the bridge as you suggest where the vocals doesn't cut through well.
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