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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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is david Online content Top 20 Poster JESUS, FIX THIS BLACK HOLE IN MY SOUL.(cowboy
V Robbed mail trains left too many blood stains Shot anyman who got in my way. Judgement day when my lifes through dont think i could face you floor below hell is where im due
C Jesus this soul you gave me Its So damaged it wont save me Jesus, fiix this black hole in my soul
V Started out stealing hard work wasnt appealing Finished up on a chain gang. Blackened what soul, i had When Freedom turned me gator bad twelve honest men will see me hang
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V Never needed to feed them love them and leave and Been a chancer all my life. My folks gave up on me By the time i was twenty had three kids by three " wives"
B When my kids grew up they were told, your poor daddy died. Momma would tell our neigbors Boys a good job in Montana Like to visit with us but its a heck of a ride
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-''----------------------------------------'----------------- JESUS, GOT A BLACK HOLE IN MY SOUL.(cowboy
V Robbed mail trains leaving too many blood stains Shot anyman who got in my way. Judgement day when my lifes through dont think i could face you floor below hell is where im dUE
C Jesus this soul you gave me So damaged it wont save me Jesus, ive got a black hole in my soul
V Started out stealing hard working wasnt appealing Finished up on a chain gang. Blackened what soul, i ever had Freedom turned me gator bad find me now and this bad boy'll hang
Chorus
V Never needed to feed them was love them leave em Been a chancer all my life. My folks gave up on me By the time i was twenty had three kids by three " wives"
B When my kids grew up they were tol your poor daddy died. Momm told neigbors, hes sttled now- with pride Hed l ike to visit with us but its a heck of a ride She got the letter, your boys back inside
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Here i stand theres no looking back Hope the Lord forgives Now this noose is round my neck.
Chorus ?
---------------------------------------#########-'-----''''''' Top 20 Poster Jesus, got a black hole in my soul V Still wind up dying Sooner, later? Theres no denying Been a chancer all my life. My folks gave up on me By the time i was twenty had three kids by three " wives" Started stealing Cause hard working wasnt appealing Finished up on a chain gang. Stole what soul, i ever had Freedom turned me gator bad If they can find me i'll hang
C Jesus this soul you gave me So damaged it wont save me Jesus, ive got a black hole in my soul
V I robbed mail trains leaving too many blood stains Shot anyman who got in my way judgement day when my lifes through dont think i could face you floor below hell is where im due B When my kids grew up they were told, your poor daddy died. Momma would tell our neigbors Boys a good job in Montana Like to visit with us but its a heck of a ride
Chorus ------------------------------------------------------------------- Jesus, got a black hole in my soul V Still wind up dying Sooner, later? Theres no denying Been a chancer all my life. My folks gave up on me By the time i was twenty had three kids by three " wives" V Started stealing Cause hard working wasnt appealing Finished up on a chain gang. Stole what soul, i ever had Freedom turned me gator bad If they can find me i'll hang C Jesus this soul you gave me So damaged it wont save me Jesus, ive got a black hole in my soul
V I robbed mail trains leaving too many blood stains Shot anyman who got in my way judgement day when my lifes through dont think i could face you floor below hell is where im due B When my kids grew up they were told, your poor daddy died. Momma would tell our neigbors Boys a good job in Montana Like to visit with us but its a heck of a ride Chorus
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Jesus, got a black hole in my soul V I keep trying But end up crying Been a bad boy through my life My folks gave up on me By the time i was 23 had four kids by "four wives" V Started stealing Instead of learning Finished up on a chain gang Took four years of my life set free took another wife I shot a man, run or hang C Jesus this soul you gave me Seems damaged and it wont save me Jesus got a black hole in my soul Making me bad as man can be V I robbed mail trains leaving blood stains Shot anyman who got in my way When accounting times due dont think i could look at you but soon face judgement day B My kids grew up, told your poor daddy died. My sad momma would tell neigbors got good job in Montana - he'd visit home, but its too long a ride Chorus
Last edited by Travis david; 05/02/17 01:43 PM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Done a rewrite on this one i started today. Bad cowboy theme Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Bump for a second rewrite Travis
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We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Looking at line two in the chorus Travis
C Jesus this soul you gave me So damaged it wont save me Jesus, ive got a black hole in my soul
His soul can't save itself. Maybe:
Is hell-bound and in need of saving??
Geneva
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Cheers Geneva another rewrite due all help welcome Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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