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#1126623 - 04/15/17 11:11 AM The Way Things Are  
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This is the latest song that I've been working on. Not sure that I'm very happy with the lyrics yet so I'm open to any suggestions. Thanks for listening and all comments welcome!

https://soundcloud.com/j-fleming-2/the-way-things-are



When we were children ... just little children

I used to tease you and pull your hair.

As we got older ... a little bit older

I ignored you like you weren't there.

That's just the way things were

That's just the way things were.

Then we were teenage ... crazy teenage

That's when I found that I loved you.

Soon we were married ... happily married

and soon became parents too.

That's just the way things were

That's just the way things were.

As we got older ... a little bit older

aging like a fine red wine.

When we were older ... quite a bit older

stay together throughout all time.

That's just the way things are

That's just the way things are.

That's just the way things are

That's just the way things are

#1126641 - 04/16/17 08:49 AM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Jimmy Fleming]  
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A cute song Jimmy.
One sugg I have is to find another line for:
"As we got older ... a little bit older
aging like a fine red wine".

It's been used many times in different forms and fine white wine ages well too.

Maybe it could be:
"As we got older ... a little bit older,
entangled like an ancient grape vine".

UOL
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#1126670 - 04/17/17 10:40 AM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Jimmy Fleming]  
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Very nice...to keep thing moving , maybe cut the instrumental break in half....

As we got older ... a little bit older
I was grateful you were still mine


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#1126675 - 04/17/17 12:50 PM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Jimmy Fleming]  
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Hi Jimmy,

Your recording skills are improving with each successive recording. Your songwriting has always impressed me. There's a rawness and directness and unpretentiousness to the way you say things, and with the things you choose to say.

The only improvement I can think of is sonically this seems a really "dry" sound, and I could imagine a bit of reverb added here and there, but this is sounding really nice, as is..

Mike

Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 04/17/17 12:51 PM.

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
#1126773 - 04/20/17 09:52 AM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Vicarn]  
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Originally Posted by Vicarn
A cute song Jimmy.
One sugg I have is to find another line for:
"As we got older ... a little bit older
aging like a fine red wine".

It's been used many times in different forms and fine white wine ages well too.

Maybe it could be:
"As we got older ... a little bit older,
entangled like an ancient grape vine".

UOL
Vic

Thank you for listening Vic and I appreciate your suggestion!

#1126774 - 04/20/17 09:53 AM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Neil Cotton]  
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Originally Posted by Neil Cotton
Very nice...to keep thing moving , maybe cut the instrumental break in half....

As we got older ... a little bit older
I was grateful you were still mine

Thank you for taking time to listen Neil and thanks for your suggestions!

#1126775 - 04/20/17 10:02 AM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Michael Zaneski]  
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Originally Posted by Michael Zaneski
Hi Jimmy,

Your recording skills are improving with each successive recording. Your songwriting has always impressed me. There's a rawness and directness and unpretentiousness to the way you say things, and with the things you choose to say.

The only improvement I can think of is sonically this seems a really "dry" sound, and I could imagine a bit of reverb added here and there, but this is sounding really nice, as is..

Mike

Thank you for listening Mike ... your critique and suggestions have taken me from someone who had no training in recording my music to a person who is becoming proud to post my songs. Thanks again for the encouraging words and thoughtful suggestions ... they really mean a lot!

#1126779 - 04/20/17 10:58 AM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Jimmy Fleming]  
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I like the lyrics just the way it is (pun on title intended here). You should be proud of your accomplishment on this one, because you went out there and did something that many don't have the ability to do. There is a lady who does a folk music show on a college radio station every Tuesday night and if you would like I'll give you her email address in a PM so you could send it to her. Peace.

#1126808 - 04/21/17 08:33 AM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: beechnut79]  
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Originally Posted by beechnut79
I like the lyrics just the way it is (pun on title intended here). You should be proud of your accomplishment on this one, because you went out there and did something that many don't have the ability to do. There is a lady who does a folk music show on a college radio station every Tuesday night and if you would like I'll give you her email address in a PM so you could send it to her. Peace.

Thanks for listening Brian and I truly appreciate your help!!!

#1126952 - 04/24/17 04:17 PM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Jimmy Fleming]  
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Heartfelt acoustic ballad with an Americana vibe.

I especially liked the construction of the guitar tracks opposite each other in the stereo field. The overall performance and production are pretty good.

I agree with Mike that you could use a bit more "space" in the mix (e.g., reverb). Also, the vocal needs some mids pulled somewhere in the 400-800 range (I am guessing 650Hz) to give it that nice open sound - then add a touch more reverb (use a long pre-delay so it doesn't clutter the vocal). I might even be tempted to experiment with some chorus or other modulation effects (just a touch) on the guitars to really meld them together.

Overall, strong song with decent production.

Peace,
TC


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#1127121 - 04/27/17 07:55 PM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Jimmy Fleming]  
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Sweet love song, Jimmy and it sounds really nice musically as well. Small nit..."as we got older" or "when we were older" begs the questions, what are you now? Maybe it would make more sense to say "now that we're older we'll be together for all time". Just an idea. I enjoyed my listen.

Ricki

#1127146 - 04/28/17 02:11 PM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Jimmy Fleming]  
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a really fine song Jimmy.Mike

#1127236 - 04/30/17 12:12 PM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: TC Perkins]  
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Originally Posted by TC Perkins
Heartfelt acoustic ballad with an Americana vibe.

I especially liked the construction of the guitar tracks opposite each other in the stereo field. The overall performance and production are pretty good.

I agree with Mike that you could use a bit more "space" in the mix (e.g., reverb). Also, the vocal needs some mids pulled somewhere in the 400-800 range (I am guessing 650Hz) to give it that nice open sound - then add a touch more reverb (use a long pre-delay so it doesn't clutter the vocal). I might even be tempted to experiment with some chorus or other modulation effects (just a touch) on the guitars to really meld them together.

Overall, strong song with decent production.

Peace,
TC

Thanks for listening TC ... I really appreciate your opinions and input ... truly means a lot to me.

#1127237 - 04/30/17 12:14 PM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
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Originally Posted by Ricki E. Bellos
Sweet love song, Jimmy and it sounds really nice musically as well. Small nit..."as we got older" or "when we were older" begs the questions, what are you now? Maybe it would make more sense to say "now that we're older we'll be together for all time". Just an idea. I enjoyed my listen.

Ricki

Thanks for listening Ricki ... I was happy with most of this song but the last lyrics just wouldn't come together for me ... I appreciate your thoughts very much!

#1127238 - 04/30/17 12:15 PM Re: The Way Things Are [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Originally Posted by Michael LeBlanc
a really fine song Jimmy.Mike

Thanks for taking time to listen Mike ... I really appreciate it!!


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