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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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Used to be someone
Used to be somone but I'm nobody now Choice of horses for riding in my corral Lipstick messages covered my tour bus dressing room ladies from dawn to dusk Used to be someone but I'm nobody now
Had a String of hits that set the money rolling in I'd goffers and flunkies fetching and carrying Used to be someone. now reduced to the bargain bin
Once had my own show on prime time TV Garth and George jumped at that opportunity Till the songs I got offered to sing seemed to me Music Row's second string Used to be someone.anyone remember me now?
Hits dried up money too,fine living had to go my record deal ended, they wanted a winner Not one that sometimes showed. USED TO BE SOMEONE LONG TIME AGO.
Last edited by Travis david; 04/07/17 08:38 AM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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I like this one Travis. My only sugg would be to take out some of the direct references to people and incidents and leave it more open to others interpretation. e.g.: "Bright lipstick tributes, the promise of lust. Dressing room comforts, and occasional bust"
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Yeah needs a further rewrite Vic and maybe I in the third person. Cheers
Last edited by Travis david; 04/07/17 01:54 PM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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