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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Get Out of The Way Verse1 I'm invisible most of the time Lost in my world of rhythm and rhyme When pride and envy stand in my way I'm my worst enemy on any given day
Verse 2 When I think it's all about me I lose perspective , can no longer be Living in the moment alert and aware When humility disappears into thin air Chorus Get out of the way...I'm blocking the light Standing between what's wrong and what's right I caste a shadow over all I believe When I allow my weaknesses to deceive
Verse 3 Stand tall and let my light shine Being true to myself is the bottom line Follow my heart...let reason be my guide Knowing that persistence can't be denied Verse 4 I need a reminder as the days go by Wake up call before the well runs dry Keep the focus on what's in front of me The older I get the the harder it will be.
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Hi, well written, a couple of clunks on the read but probably work in the song, I think the let my light shine bit kinda contradicts the casting a shadow,something that ends . like,,, ???? suits me fine,would back up the singers attitude imo,
reminded me of a great John Mellencamp song. Troubled Man. all the best, john
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Thanks John for reading my lyrics. I appreciate your comments and taking the time to critique!
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