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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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FAWN #6
It Takes A Man--MALE LEAD
© 2017 Schantell Wharton/ASCAP
V1 It takes a man To come back and say What can I do to make this right? I know I was wrong but I want you back in my life These months without you Were hard for me I’d reach for the phone Then remember our fight
Ch It takes a man to admit he was wrong. Because by my side is where you belong. I know I don't have to always be right. It’s a cold reality when I’m alone at night.
V2 The urge to call is so great I’d see your car everywhere I heard you call my name In the mall and at work I had to get a grip on my emotions Evaluate my perspective You told me to grow up and be a man And with your help I can--give me time.
Ch It takes a man to admit he was wrong. Because by my side is where you belong. I know I don't have to always be right. It’s a cold reality when alone at night.
V3 Memories became my security The only glimpse I had of you The reality is I needed you back I know I have to treat you right You say I am not what you need How can I change that? I'm ready to invest in our relationship Let me be the man for you.
Ch It takes a man to admit he was wrong. Because by my side is where you belong. I know I don't have to always be right. It’s a cold reality when I’m alone at night. It takes a man--2x fades out
“What come from the heart touches the heart” ASCAP
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I like your style of writing. It's to the point and easy to understand.
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Hi Jim
Thanks for commenting on the piece. I am doing some final rewrite and hopefully will have music up soon. That is my goal to Perform these songs on video and at gigs around town.
Thanks
Sincerely Schantell
“What come from the heart touches the heart” ASCAP
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