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Dennis Wright Song title/ ''Time For A Change'' © 2017 ------------------------------------------ Vs. 1: So much is going on in this world today We gotta stay strong and keep the faith Cause only God knows what another day may bring People it's time for a change
Chorus: It's a new year a new day America is in need of God's saving grace Only love can conquer hate Together we can put a stop to racism today
Vs. 2: Every minute that passes a life been taken away Seem like nobody care they go about their own way But what about the safety for our children sake Every gun should be banned from the United States
Chorus: It's a new year a new day America is in need of God's saving grace Only love can conquer hate Together we can put a stop to the violence today
Vs. 3: Everyday this world grows colder nations against nations Black and white fighting against one another But ain't nothing going to get any better Until we learn to love and respect each other
Bridge: If we take a stand together We can make America better
Chorus: It's a new year a new day America is in need of God's saving grace Only love can conquer hate Together we can make America great again
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You can't be serious.
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I think you should focus on one idea at a time. You mention there should be less guns, why not write about that alone? Maybe write a story about something that shows why it's so dangerous.
I read a story one time about a young girl who wanted to play a joke on her dad, so she hid in a closet and decided shed jump out when h came in his room. The father heard the tussling in the closet and thought it was a burglar.
He ( stupidly in my opinion) got his shot gun and fired into the closet and killed his daughter.
Now that's a story!
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Thank you sir! I'm currently doing some revising. God bless! Dennis,
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I do believe that we elected the wrong person to really make America great again. I was a Bernie Sanders supporter and although he didn't get the nomination the movement that he started is very much alive. Talk about chaos! Seems that there is always a place for it, yet more often than not we create our own. Good write.
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Thank you sir for commenting! So far I have revised this song lyric twice. Now I'm sitting here going over it again.
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This is perfectly written I dont have any other thing to say keep writing
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Thank you so much I really appreciate it. God bless!
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