Sorry everyone, this is in reference to the song by d*rock, i messed up and i can't delete it. I think that you are on to something here. However, I do think that it is a bit of a knock off of tim mcgraw...more so than kenny chesney. Maybe if you looked at reworking the melody in your chorus going into the just like that. The melody there is very capturing and climactic. IMO, the rest of the chorus sounds too much like the tim mcgraw song "That's something that just dont' happen twice" or something or the other. Anyway, keep up the good work. 1

[This message has been edited by tew04 (edited 11-13-2004).]


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