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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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A co-write with David Snyder. I LOVE YOU WHEN IT RAINS you and me behind the barn storm clouds on the way hear that thunder bring it on, i pray we kiss... it's lightning those first drops begin to fall i've got you right where i want you, girl my back against the wall i love you when it rains a river flowing through your hair seeing you drenched in that old t shirt i bought you at the fair don't mind a sunny day but making love this way you drive me crazy insane god... i love you when it rains kiss your neck, kiss your nose kiss your body from your head to your toes girl, my love grows and grows and grows tell me what you want should we run for cover, safe, inside or we can do it all right here whatever you decide repeat chorus let the heavens open wide let it rain let it rain let it rain repeat chorus ©2016 david snyder and floyd jane Hope y'all enjoy it. Comments encouraged. floyd
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Hi Floyd,
Such a beautiful song/performance.
Calvin
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You had me after a few lines...well done! Hit material.
Last edited by Neil Cotton; 09/08/16 11:19 PM.
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Hi Dave/Floyd,
Great song guys, great hook, interesting & expressive lyrics! Solid production guys!
steady-eddie.
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Congratulations, Floyd and David:
Beautiful song... well written and a super performance. I agree with Eddie 100%. Best of luck with it. ----Dave
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Very nice FLoyd. I knew that it would be before I listened.
Last edited by Martin Lide; 09/09/16 11:19 AM.
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Simply fantastic. Everything about it is top notch. Like Neil said, "hit material." Congrats to both of you. What a vocal!
Dave
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Hi Floyd and David, This is a wonderfully detailed romantic lyric with music that matches every beat of the sweet lyric, and Floyd's vocal performance is once again stellar work that has star quality written all over it. Beautiful work, guys. Mike
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Thanks for your continued support, Calvin... Thanks for stopping in, Ricki...
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You had me after a few lines...well done! Hit material.
Thanks, Neil. Always good to hear.... Hi Dave/Floyd,
Great song guys, great hook, interesting & expressive lyrics! Solid production guys!
steady-eddie. We appreciate that, Ed...
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Another Smoker guys. Floyd you really nailed the chorus.
*** seeing you drenched in that old t shirt i bought you at the fair I won for you at the fair
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Congratulations, Floyd and David:
Beautiful song... well written and a super performance. I agree with Eddie 100%. Best of luck with it. ----Dave Dave - We appreciate that.... Very nice FLoyd. I knew that it would be before I listened. Thanks, Martin....
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Wow!!! Loving us some mr jane power vocals.
We were big Hal Ketchum fans back in the day and when you crank it up we are transported to that time...a good place to be.
Even without the outstanding write and production the vocals alone would make this a high bar tune.
Superb.
J&B
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Simply fantastic. Everything about it is top notch. Like Neil said, "hit material." Congrats to both of you. What a vocal!
Dave We appreciate that, Dave. Thanks for stopping by...
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Hi Floyd and David, This is a wonderfully detailed romantic lyric with music that matches every beat of the sweet lyric, and Floyd's vocal performance is once again stellar work that has star quality written all over it. Beautiful work, guys. Mike We appreciate that, Mike... thanks for the vocal note... Another Smoker guys. Floyd you really nailed the chorus.
*** seeing you drenched in that old t shirt i bought you at the fair I won for you at the fair Thanks, Nelson... we've had that suggestion from elsewhere... but, we both prefer "bought" because it sings better...
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Hey F & D,
Haven't been by in a while.....This rocks hard and comes through with a great cascading chorus.... Excellent writing and vocals... Great job!
iggy2
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Wow!!! Loving us some mr jane power vocals.
We were big Hal Ketchum fans back in the day and when you crank it up we are transported to that time...a good place to be.
Even without the outstanding write and production the vocals alone would make this a high bar tune.
Superb.
J&B Y'all are too nice. Hey F & D,
Haven't been by in a while.....This rocks hard and comes through with a great cascading chorus.... Excellent writing and vocals... Great job!
iggy2 Ihor - we do appreciate that... thanks for stopping by...
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This is good Floyd, my only nit is this the hair/fair couplet which seemed little forced.But! what an outstanding song! Travis
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I got goose bumps when you hit the first chorus! Amazing! I listened a few times. Really, the only thing this song needs a good producer to bring it out. It’s real and it’s SO close, just needs some tweaking… IMO. Peace! Dave
Spelling and grammer are not my thing, so excuse the type-Os... Iffin I don't review your song, sorry, I'm trying to stay with styles I like. But I do listen to all on 2 pages when I have time.
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