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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/04/24 12:47 PM
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Hello Paul,
Catchy beat / cool guitar !
Good to see ya.
Calvin
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Calvin: Hey thanks ! Heard yours today. Yes its cool. We are all birds in many way aren't we.
see you!
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hey Paul,that's a pretty slinky groove there,i like it.Mike
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Thanks Mike for your feedback. This ones only a few months old.
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Very cool groove, Paul. Maybe post the lyrics, not sure I caught them all.
Ricki
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Welcome back Paul! I clicked on your soundclick link at it said: "This account is currently under review. " I'll try again later.
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Thanks Ricki appreciate your positive reaction to this one .
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Hey Kevin: I think it is fixed. Try it again .
Thanks !
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I get the same message.
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That link works fine. Another cool guitar groove. Sounding quite good.
Mix wise, I would try reducing the reverb on the vocal line and then then add a small reverb to the master bus to glue it all together. Maybe a tad of compression on the vocal might help also.
Just some minor suggestions, glad to see you back in action around here. Nice lead break, too!
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Thanks for the "fixed" link, Paul:
Loved the words and melody... Kevin's ears work well and I agree with his suggestion. Knowing that this is a fairly new "write" I also understand that you are only letting us hear it in it's infancy. So much potential here... and I wish you the best of luck when it's time to "pitch it." Enjoyed! ----Dave
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Kevin: Appreciate your analysis soundwise. I will go back to the "studio" and tweak it a bit. Seriously I am open to any production tips you can give.
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Hi Dave. Yes I am still playing with it. I should have a new version shortly.
Regards
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