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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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[This message has been edited by palidin (edited 09-07-2004).]
[This message has been edited by palidin (edited 09-30-2004).]
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I like it just as it is.Sounds to my monds eye like it is country rock,but you may have a different style in mind.Either way a good upbeat song that is what everyone is asking for.Good work! David
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Thanks SQ and Davy for your views. Your both right. it is intended to be a country rock tune. Now all I have to do is get Brooks & Dunn or Travis Tritt to record it!! The grammar is not right but it is intended that way but since you mention it maybe it does flow better with the right puntuation. I think it could work either way but the best way is what I want. Your point is well taken and you are doing your job well. If you had'nt corrected me on that "cold dark" thing in Hopeless Ship, I might have never noticed it. Keep up the good work. I need that.
Rob
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Hi...I am not sure if maybe I read this before in an earlier post and this is a re-write...but I am a big fan of The Rock from the WWE...and I can't help but think of him with this lyric. This is definitely his attitude...
I really enjoyed this...keep it coming!!
Keep it coming!! Nicki...
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Looks good to me. Good luck with it. ------------------ http://shayneman.proboards19.com/
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Your right,Nicnac I posted this earlier this year, I've just done a little fine tuning
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Thanks Shayne, It was a fun lyric, but a killer to get it right
Robert
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