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by Fdemetrio - 04/23/24 12:11 AM
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Take a listen please and thanx! Thanx Todd for taking interest and working this into a groovy little number! http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13253992Some Of Me Some Of You took two steps back and looked around shattered pieces all on the ground some of me,some of you i closed my eyes and held my breath knowing there was nothing left none of me,none of you some things change for a reason could only be a change of season as time sets in the colors fade the dreams unravel,hearts are frayed there was a time we both did share we knew we made the perfect pair one of me,one of you now looking back i must admit i wish we'd never called it quits dumb of me,dumb of you some things change for a reason could only be a change of season as time sets in the colors fade the dreams unravel,hearts are frayed
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It was great working with you Mike! A great big shout goes out to Little Stevie B who spent quite a bit of time mixing this as well!
Todd
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I really like this song! It has tremendous potential. You guys just need to fix a couple things and get a top notch production of this.
OK, first things first. The harmony played by the guitar on the first part of every verse is clashing with the melody. It is mostly right but there is one note played on the guitar during that sequence that rubs the vocals.
I love the hook, and the overall lyrics/melody/etc. are quite good. The performance on this version is okay but it could be much better. I think you guys could improve this with minimal work. I think by working on it some more the production would also benefit.
Good song!
Peace, TC
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Well heck yeah,thanx Lil' Stevie!!!Glad to see/hear you had a hand in there.Mike
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OK guys, this one is sticking in my head now. On my second listen here. I really enjoy the casual vibe and vocal delivery. Nice job!
Tom
Last edited by Tom W.; 11/16/15 02:49 AM.
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Good song all round my American friends! Great hook and melody with a solid lyric. Best of luck with it Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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thanx for the listen and those thoughts TC!I appreciate your visit.Mike
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hey Tom,that's good,keep it in your head!Thanx for stoppin' by.Mike
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Great job by both ... really nice tune!!!
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i appreciate that Jimmy!Mike
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thank ya for the spin and comment Calvin!Mike
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I really like this song! It has tremendous potential. You guys just need to fix a couple things and get a top notch production of this.
OK, first things first. The harmony played by the guitar on the first part of every verse is clashing with the melody. It is mostly right but there is one note played on the guitar during that sequence that rubs the vocals.
I love the hook, and the overall lyrics/melody/etc. are quite good. The performance on this version is okay but it could be much better. I think you guys could improve this with minimal work. I think by working on it some more the production would also benefit.
Good song!
Peace, TC Thanks TC, glad you liked it! and yes it could be better, if I had more skills. I will continue to work on it. As far as the note clashing with the melody, I'm not catching it. where in the lyrics would it happen? Todd
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