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#1095688 - 11/15/15 05:27 PM Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write  
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Take a listen please and thanx!
Thanx Todd for taking interest and working this into a groovy little number!

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13253992

Some Of Me Some Of You

took two steps back and looked around
shattered pieces all on the ground
some of me,some of you

i closed my eyes and held my breath
knowing there was nothing left
none of me,none of you

some things change for a reason
could only be a change of season
as time sets in the colors fade
the dreams unravel,hearts are frayed

there was a time we both did share
we knew we made the perfect pair
one of me,one of you

now looking back i must admit
i wish we'd never called it quits
dumb of me,dumb of you

some things change for a reason
could only be a change of season
as time sets in the colors fade
the dreams unravel,hearts are frayed

#1095709 - 11/16/15 12:10 AM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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It was great working with you Mike! A great big shout goes out to Little Stevie B who spent quite a bit of time mixing this as well!

Todd


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give you only what you have already given us!

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#1095711 - 11/16/15 12:38 AM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: Todd Strachan]  
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I really like this song! It has tremendous potential. You guys just need to fix a couple things and get a top notch production of this.

OK, first things first. The harmony played by the guitar on the first part of every verse is clashing with the melody. It is mostly right but there is one note played on the guitar during that sequence that rubs the vocals.

I love the hook, and the overall lyrics/melody/etc. are quite good. The performance on this version is okay but it could be much better. I think you guys could improve this with minimal work. I think by working on it some more the production would also benefit.

Good song!

Peace,
TC


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#1095712 - 11/16/15 01:11 AM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: TC Perkins]  
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Well heck yeah,thanx Lil' Stevie!!!Glad to see/hear you had a hand in there.Mike

#1095719 - 11/16/15 02:47 AM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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OK guys, this one is sticking in my head now. On my second listen here. I really enjoy the casual vibe and vocal delivery. Nice job!

Tom

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#1095722 - 11/16/15 08:23 AM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: Tom W.]  
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Good song all round my American friends! Great hook and melody with a solid lyric. Best of luck with it
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#1095733 - 11/16/15 02:02 PM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: Travis david]  
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thanx for the listen and those thoughts TC!I appreciate your visit.Mike

#1095734 - 11/16/15 02:03 PM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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hey Tom,that's good,keep it in your head!Thanx for stoppin' by.Mike

#1095758 - 11/16/15 04:30 PM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Great job by both ... really nice tune!!!

#1095799 - 11/17/15 02:08 AM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: Jimmy Fleming]  
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Thanx a lot Travis!Mike

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i appreciate that Jimmy!Mike

#1095807 - 11/17/15 09:03 AM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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good job guys, I really like the small pause after the word FRAYED.

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#1095832 - 11/17/15 04:33 PM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: Calvin]  
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thank ya for the spin and comment Calvin!Mike

#1095858 - 11/17/15 11:31 PM Re: Some Of Me Some Of You a Todd Strachan co-write [Re: TC Perkins]  
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Originally Posted by TC Perkins
I really like this song! It has tremendous potential. You guys just need to fix a couple things and get a top notch production of this.

OK, first things first. The harmony played by the guitar on the first part of every verse is clashing with the melody. It is mostly right but there is one note played on the guitar during that sequence that rubs the vocals.

I love the hook, and the overall lyrics/melody/etc. are quite good. The performance on this version is okay but it could be much better. I think you guys could improve this with minimal work. I think by working on it some more the production would also benefit.

Good song!

Peace,
TC


Thanks TC, glad you liked it! and yes it could be better, if I had more skills. I will continue to work on it. As far as the note clashing with the melody, I'm not catching it. where in the lyrics would it happen?

Todd


Everything we have has come from you, and we
give you only what you have already given us!

1 Chronicles 29:14


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