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#1093240 - 10/03/15 06:53 PM This Town Ain't Big Enough  
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... sometimes there's just nowhere to turn...

THIS TOWN AIN'T BIG ENOUGH

i hear montana is pretty this time of year
i ain't been to vegas for a while, so i might head there
the south of france or katmandu
if there's no chance i'll run into you

   this town ain't big enough, baby
   big enough for you and me
   all this small talk's driving me crazy
   i can't hide from what we used to be
   around every corner, in ev'ry face i meet
   in ev'ry cobblestone of every street
   this town's overcrowded with memories
   so, this town ain't big enough for you and me

it ain't easy watching you run around town
i know it's over, my heart needs to break some new ground
just when i think i'm strong
you walk by and you prove me wrong

   this town ain't big enough, baby
   big enough for you and me
   all this small talk's driving me crazy
   i can't hide from what we used to be
   around every corner, in ev'ry face i meet
   in ev'ry cobblestone of every street
   this town's overcrowded with memories
   so, this town ain't big enough for you and me

if we could cut it down the middle, divide it with a fence
maybe my heart would stand half a chance...

   this town ain't big enough, baby
   big enough for you and me
   all this small talk's driving me crazy
   i can't hide from what we used to be
   around every corner, in ev'ry face i meet
   in ev'ry cobblestone of every street
   this town's overcrowded with memories
   so, this town ain't big enough for you and me

Thanks for listening.

floyd

#1093258 - 10/04/15 01:48 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: floyd jane]  
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Hey Floyd,
It sounds AWESOME!!!
Anther one for the Floyd Jane Hit Parade!
Lisa

#1093263 - 10/04/15 03:18 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Lisa Gundling]  
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Floyd-

This one should be on the RADIO!

I love it!

Mackie

#1093264 - 10/04/15 04:15 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Mackie H.]  
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Pretty cool Floyd,i like the hook!Mike

#1093291 - 10/04/15 10:46 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: floyd jane]  
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Hi Floyd,

Great mix , vocals, and overall production.

The chorus emphasizes how the town's not "big enough" because everything reminds him of her, so I'm not sure if the bridge works, because it seems to be about equity. But if everything reminds him of her, how will it help for everything to be divided in half? Maybe I am misreading the bridge--it wouldn't be the first time!

Mike


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#1093307 - 10/05/15 07:17 AM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Michael Zaneski]  
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Ooh, wonderful and super skilled songwriting!

Everything is to the point and great contrast in both the lyric and musically in the chorus! The music is as big as Texas, which is appropriate with that hook. I had a great listen!

I love how you made the girl look good, by turning the cliché "this town is not big enough for both of us" around emotionally, and telling it from the hurt protagonist's viewpoint. Wonderful writing!

If anything, I'd swap the second and the first verse around, as the second verse sets the stage much better (who, when, where, what, how). The first verse elaborates more on the emotion, as I read it. I think that would make a stronger impact from the start. The line "my heart needs to break some new ground" really made me pay attention!

In the bridge, I'd also consider underlining the world "half", with a long high note, in stead of dividing it between "stand" and "half" like you do now... "stand haaaaaaaaalf a chance".. because that would emphasize the first couplet you had in the bridge ("cut it down the middle"/ "divide it with a fence"), and make that look even better, imo.

Who's on the recording, is it a studio demo or did you do it yourself? Sounds pretty close to what they are pitching in Nashville to me.

Anyway, song of the month for me. I'm a sucker for this type of songwriting. Sounds like a Brooks & Dunn hit to me (but the town isn't big enough for both of them now! heheh).


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#1093313 - 10/05/15 09:47 AM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Kolstad]  
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Hi Floyd,

This is work to be proud of.
Thanks for the entertainment.

Calvin

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#1093320 - 10/05/15 11:55 AM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Calvin]  
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Out of the park, again... Floyd.

I always enjoy your songs. This one would have "charted" when Nashville was Nashville.

#1093329 - 10/05/15 03:02 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: floyd jane]  
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Well done ... nice write, nice arrangement, and great performance!!

#1093344 - 10/05/15 06:45 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Originally Posted by Lisa Gundling
Hey Floyd,
It sounds AWESOME!!!
Anther one for the Floyd Jane Hit Parade!
Lisa

Thank you, Lisa... you are always so kind..


Originally Posted by Mackie H.
Floyd-

This one should be on the RADIO!

I love it!

Mackie

Mackie - you say the nicest things!


Originally Posted by Michael LeBlanc
Pretty cool Floyd,i like the hook!Mike

Thanks, Mike.

#1093353 - 10/05/15 08:36 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: floyd jane]  
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Another good one Floyd. Now STOP IT!!! You're making us look bad.

Stevie

#1093400 - 10/06/15 08:59 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Little_stevie_b]  
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Pagin' George Strait...OK he retired but what the heck
we have mr jane to carry on what is now a tradition.
Keith Whitley, George Strait, Clint Black, Alan Jackson
and a precious few others defined this tradition for us.
We thought they "saved" country music while never
dreaming it could morph into what passes nowadays.
But there's something in the air of late -- hints here
and there that the times are a changin' in the country
music world. So mr jane instead of carrying on the tradition
you may very well be at the vanguard of a new one and
we hope so.

Dang, I got off course. We LOVE this tune!

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#1093418 - 10/07/15 12:31 AM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Janice_and_Bud]  
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Floyd,

Great tune, pulls you in and the great melody stays with you. I don't often disagree with Mike Z, but I like the bridge as it is metaphorical -- stating that yes, everywhere he goes he sees memories, but metaphorically, if those memories and faces could stay on one side, he might be able to exist there.......I don't think the line is meant to be literal in other words. Therefore I think it's a great expression.

Nice performance/production/write!

steady-eddie.


#1093438 - 10/07/15 11:22 AM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: E Swartz]  
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Excellent story song and vocal Floyd, as Mackie commented it should be on the radio
Travis


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#1093472 - 10/07/15 02:59 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Travis david]  
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You had some good suggs already Floyd.
It's a good sound and vocal is tops.

Vic


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#1093536 - 10/08/15 02:24 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Calvin]  
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Originally Posted by Michael Zaneski
Hi Floyd,

Great mix , vocals, and overall production.

The chorus emphasizes how the town's not "big enough" because everything reminds him of her, so I'm not sure if the bridge works, because it seems to be about equity. But if everything reminds him of her, how will it help for everything to be divided in half? Maybe I am misreading the bridge--it wouldn't be the first time!

Mike

Thanks, Mike. The bridge is "an alternative" idea - he qualifies it by "maybe"...


Originally Posted by Kolstad
Ooh, wonderful and super skilled songwriting!

Everything is to the point and great contrast in both the lyric and musically in the chorus! The music is as big as Texas, which is appropriate with that hook. I had a great listen!

I love how you made the girl look good, by turning the cliché "this town is not big enough for both of us" around emotionally, and telling it from the hurt protagonist's viewpoint. Wonderful writing!

If anything, I'd swap the second and the first verse around, as the second verse sets the stage much better (who, when, where, what, how). The first verse elaborates more on the emotion, as I read it. I think that would make a stronger impact from the start. The line "my heart needs to break some new ground" really made me pay attention!

In the bridge, I'd also consider underlining the world "half", with a long high note, in stead of dividing it between "stand" and "half" like you do now... "stand haaaaaaaaalf a chance".. because that would emphasize the first couplet you had in the bridge ("cut it down the middle"/ "divide it with a fence"), and make that look even better, imo.

Who's on the recording, is it a studio demo or did you do it yourself? Sounds pretty close to what they are pitching in Nashville to me.

Anyway, song of the month for me. I'm a sucker for this type of songwriting. Sounds like a Brooks & Dunn hit to me (but the town isn't big enough for both of them now! heheh).

Kolstad - I do appreciate the nice comments... regarding the swap - I prefer the "intrigue" of verse 1 coming first, followed by the "in-depth" of verse 2. A personal thing, I guess... thinking about it, if I heard it the other way, I would likely suggest that they be swapped... I produce all my own demos at home (a lot cheaper that way!!). Appreciate the listen...



Originally Posted by Calvin
Hi Floyd,

This is work to be proud of.
Thanks for the entertainment.

Calvin


Thank you, Calvin...


#1093549 - 10/08/15 05:18 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: floyd jane]  
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Another great write, super vocals and a well produced song. How about throwing out something bad so we can really tear it apart? smile

Ricki

#1093609 - 10/09/15 04:37 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Little_stevie_b]  
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Originally Posted by Dave Rice
Out of the park, again... Floyd.

I always enjoy your songs. This one would have "charted" when Nashville was Nashville.

Thanks, Dave. I was listening to the radio today (what is called Country) for the first time in a while. I don't mind that music evolves into something else... but why did they have to KILL Country music?


Originally Posted by Jimmy Fleming
Well done ... nice write, nice arrangement, and great performance!!

Thanks, Jimmy...


Originally Posted by Little_stevie_b
Another good one Floyd. Now STOP IT!!! You're making us look bad.

Stevie

LOL - thanks for stopping by, Stevie...



#1093641 - 10/10/15 11:52 AM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: E Swartz]  
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Originally Posted by Janice & Bud
Pagin' George Strait...OK he retired but what the heck
we have mr jane to carry on what is now a tradition.
Keith Whitley, George Strait, Clint Black, Alan Jackson
and a precious few others defined this tradition for us.
We thought they "saved" country music while never
dreaming it could morph into what passes nowadays.
But there's something in the air of late -- hints here
and there that the times are a changin' in the country
music world. So mr jane instead of carrying on the tradition
you may very well be at the vanguard of a new one and
we hope so.

Dang, I got off course. We LOVE this tune!

J&B

Y'all are way too nice! (Thanks!!)


Originally Posted by E Swartz
Floyd,

Great tune, pulls you in and the great melody stays with you. I don't often disagree with Mike Z, but I like the bridge as it is metaphorical -- stating that yes, everywhere he goes he sees memories, but metaphorically, if those memories and faces could stay on one side, he might be able to exist there.......I don't think the line is meant to be literal in other words. Therefore I think it's a great expression.

Nice performance/production/write!

steady-eddie.


Thanks, Ed - appreciate that... a good "explanation", there...




#1093642 - 10/10/15 11:53 AM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
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Originally Posted by Travis david
Excellent story song and vocal Floyd, as Mackie commented it should be on the radio
Travis

Thanks, Travis.


Originally Posted by Vicarn
You had some good suggs already Floyd.
It's a good sound and vocal is tops.

Vic

Thanks, Vic.


Originally Posted by Ricki E. Bellos
Another great write, super vocals and a well produced song. How about throwing out something bad so we can really tear it apart? smile

Ricki

smile Appreciate that, Ricki...


#1093681 - 10/10/15 07:00 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: floyd jane]  
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really good song man...great production too....I think the piano could be a little further out panning wise ....just to define it a little better but, hey..I am listening on my laptop and it still sound great....good job man...you are really good at this stuff...

#1093838 - 10/13/15 02:57 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: joro]  
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This is a great write all around: Music,lyrics and performance!

Knocked this one out of the park!

Rich

#1093851 - 10/13/15 08:09 PM Re: This Town Ain't Big Enough [Re: rpirone]  
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Originally Posted by joro
really good song man...great production too....I think the piano could be a little further out panning wise ....just to define it a little better but, hey..I am listening on my laptop and it still sound great....good job man...you are really good at this stuff...

Thanks, Joe... the piano is spread across the sonic field - could be that does not come across on a laptop...


Originally Posted by rpirone
This is a great write all around: Music,lyrics and performance!

Knocked this one out of the park!

Rich

Appreciate that, Rich...


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