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vs You're leaving tomorrow so you say Don't know why it can't be today Then I wouldn't have to see you pretend You're sad that it's come to an end vs We had a good run I suppose But like all that is good it soon goes Then you wake up and realise It's all been a pack of lies Chorus: Sing me a happy song So I can sing a long One that's beautiful and sweet Has a very catchy beat Sing me a happy song Sing me a happy song vs I find myself another babe Some one to take her place It's a whole lot easier than I thought It turns out there really are a lot vs So I replace her every week But it's not variety I seek Cause the face always stays the same And they always have her name Chorus: Sing me a happy song So I can sing a long One that's beautiful and sweet Has a very catchy beat Sing me a happy song Sing me a happy song SING ME A HAPPY SONG
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vs I find myself another babe Some one to take her place It's a whole lot easier than I thought It turns out there really are a lot
Should this be your bridge Joe? There's a typo on first word "I" "I'll" perhaps? Found this one a bit hard going not up to your usual good standard,maybe it's me lol. Cheers Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hi Joe,
So it's going along all sweetly for me and then BAM, he finds himself another babe and then one every week and my head is spinning, but then we're back to thinking of her..
Good, honest write, but maybe a few transitions so that we're not shocked?! lol!
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Hey Travis I guess you're right I'll sounds better. I thought this was easy to follow, girl ditches guy, he's still in love with her so he goes around dating other girls who look a little like her and have the same first name as her, and when he's making love he pictures his ex. Thanks for being so honest.
Cheers Joe
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Hey Lisa There's nothing sweet about this, It's a break up song plain and simple. glad you enjoyed it though.
Peace Joe
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Cool song Joe. I was kind of like Lisa, cruisin' through this when BAM! I didn't see that coming at all, but that's not a bad thing. Actually I think I like it, lol. Good job!
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Hey Joe,
I liked that BAM!
It really kept my interest!
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Nice write! I always like songs with a bit of surprise!
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Hey David I think I must be the only one who wasn't surprised by the BAM!(and not because I wrote it) it just seemed obvious that it was heading that way.
Cheer Joe
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Hey Geneva Glad you enjoyed it.
Peace Joe
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Hey Jen Thanks, I try my best to keep it interesting.
Peace Joe
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Mine didn't even say goodbye. Her parents just came and got her.
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Hey Jim Ouch! that's gotta hurt.
Cheers Joe
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