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Trouble Is http://www.reverbnation.com/daviddreuter/song/22142401-trouble-is
Trouble is lightning will strike twice In the same place on a lonely night This empty bed will catch fire if it strikes just right Yeah it can burn down this whole house Light up everything for miles around Leave nothin’ left but a scar on my heart and a scar on the ground Trouble is what I’m needin’ ain’t what I want I wanna feel a touch that burns on and on Trouble is your memory only lasts so long then it’s gone That’s what the trouble is Trouble is lightning comes before the storm With thunder and rain and a slammin’ screen door A curse and a swear that you can’t take back ‘n I love you’s after that Trouble is what I’m needin’ ain’t what I want I wanna feel a touch that burns on and on Trouble is your memory only lasts so long then it’s gone That’s what the trouble is Why does a your touch run so deep Why does bitter leave a taste so sweet Trouble is what I’m needin’ ain’t what I want I wanna feel a touch that burns on and on Trouble is your memory only lasts so long then it’s gone That’s what the trouble is Bowers, Daye, Reuter ©2014
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Very nice. Seems congruent with the lyric.
I like the hook, and very memorable.
I noticed you wrote the lyric in three line sets, but it sounds more like a four line verse?
Enjoyed it, well done.
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Very nice. Seems congruent with the lyric.
I like the hook, and very memorable.
I noticed you wrote the lyric in three line sets, but it sounds more like a four line verse?
Enjoyed it, well done. Thanks for the Listen and the Comments www.facebook.com/bigtentnashvilleDavid
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You got it going on. Love that vocalist, too -- she is super. Post more! It is great have top notch talent taking the time to stop by and contribute. I know you probably don't have much time, but try and listen and critique a couple. Folks here would want feedback from someone who is doing the nashville thing. I know how time consuming it is, though, to listen to folks and make comments.
Of course, if you just want to post, that is just fine too!
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You got it going on. Love that vocalist, too -- she is super. Post more! It is great have top notch talent taking the time to stop by and contribute. I know you probably don't have much time, but try and listen and critique a couple. Folks here would want feedback from someone who is doing the nashville thing. I know how time consuming it is, though, to listen to folks and make comments.
Of course, if you just want to post, that is just fine too! Thank You Kevin ... That's Molly Bowers singing. She's a student at Belmont University here in Nashville ... She's a GREAT Writer and Artist. We LOVE writing with her !!! https://www.facebook.com/MollyTBowers
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