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vs Chronologically time marches on But surgically the deadwood's gone My body's in it's finest shape I even had them lift my face vs Some of my bits have been enhanced Gives me a better chance of more romance Some folks say I'm tempting fate But I look good and I feel great Chorus: Oh your only as old as the women you feel So I'm twenty two and keeping it real I've got a six pack, and buns of steel Made ten million bucks on my last deal
Your only as old as the women you feel I got a dozen hot mommas in my wheels Now I don't know how them rock stars cope Taking those pills and smoking that dope But you're only as old as the women you feel vs Don't know how long I can keep going But when I die at least I'll die knowing I really did give it all I had And I'll die happy so don't feel sad vs Don't care what they do with all my money They can share it out amongst all my honeys So it will bring them endless joy As they snuggle up to their latest boy Chorus: Yeah you're only as old as the women you feel So I'm twenty two and keeping it real I've got a six pack and buns of steel Made ten million bucks on my last deal
You're only as old as the women you feel I've got a dozen hot mommas in my wheels I don't know how them rock stars cope Taking those pills and smoking that dope You're only as old as the women you feel
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Lol some good lines Joe, and some old favourites too.Good story. Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hey Travis Thanks, glad you like it. Yeah there are some well worn lines there, but it gets difficult after a while.
Cheers Joe
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This is great, Joe! You have no fear!
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UK JOE--
ALL WE NEED IS A BREW THAT WILL HELP US GET, ALL YOU HAVE IN THIS LYRIC--I'LL BE FIRST IN LINE TO TRY A SIP OR TWO!
I LIKE IT!
Write on--
Mackie
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Love the idea! It's really cute. Think it seems a little wordy in places. I would lose opening with "chronologically" and just start with "Time marches on".
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Hey Jim Glad you liked it. No fear eh? I like it. lol
Cheers Joe
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Hey Mackie It's been awhile. nice to hear from you and glad you like it.
All the best Joe
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Hey Bholt Thanks for your reply. The chronologically line works fine with the melody as it is. Glad you like it.
Peace Joe
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