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#1034453 - 01/01/14 08:52 PM Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins New Video Added  
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This is a melody/track that my guitar teacher had and he let me put a lyric to it and sing it.

I am always so thrilled to have a great track to sing to and it is a different style for me to take on.

Thanks to Dannyk1 for mixing for me, he worked really hard on this one, he is a good friend.


CAN'T WAIT 'TIL THE MORNING BEGINS on SoundClick


There is a video now, thanks to Dannyk1 for putting it together:


http://youtu.be/SsfLwwtMeNk



Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins
Lyrics by Tammy Carlson, Music by Mike Loce
© 2013


The soft Autumn light
breaks my dream as the sky
colors my night into day
birds sing a tune
it echos round my room
my guitar comes out to play

with a heart full of song
I ramble along
on a road bathed in the sun
I kick up the dew
and my thoughts turn to you
the wind whispers you're the one

Chorus
when the moon rules the sky and the stars blind my eyes
the night is filled with goodbyes
but daybreak is when I'll see you again
and I can't wait til the morning begins

Pine rests on a breeze
that rustles the leaves
on the pathway to your home
I'll share this time
your hand in mine
dawn won't find us alone

In the early hours
we pick sparkling flowers
and inhale the spice in the air
no words can describe
the beauty outside
or the kiss that we've shared


Chorus
when the moon rules the sky and the stars blind my eyes
the night is filled with goodbyes
but daybreak is when I'll see you again
and I can't wait 'til the morning begins


Instrumental Break


Chorus
when the moon rules the sky and the stars blind my eyes
the night is filled with goodbyes
but daybreak is when I'll see you again
and I can't wait til the morning

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I can't wait til the morning begins

Last edited by TamsNumber4; 01/19/14 09:09 PM.

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#1034555 - 01/02/14 04:31 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Oh, the joy of morning in the soul of one who is happy, to slip from the facade of dreams into a world that holds promises kept.
I love this one tam.Your use of nature and the elements works well on this song.~~~Matt

#1034561 - 01/02/14 04:55 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: MFB III]  
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Tammy, You've got a real good chorus in this love song. Well written and evocative. It's a Midnight song. So it feels to me like there is a disconnect between the verses and chorus. Both verses place you in the morning, yet the chorus has you waiting for daybreak. My only suggestion is to consider setting the verses at night time shortly after the goodbyes have been said to make the most out of the chorus which has the singer in anticipation of daybreak.


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#1034648 - 01/03/14 01:34 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: Dan Sullivan]  
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You're real tight with your lyrics here,fine job.It's good to see you pick up the tempo too.I enjoyed this Tammy!Mike

#1034655 - 01/03/14 01:56 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Tammy,

LOVE your vocal on this! You are cookin'!
You need to find someone to add a drum track to this for you.
It would really rock, then!

Nice.

floyd

#1034676 - 01/03/14 04:42 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins *DELETED* *DELETED* [Re: floyd jane]  
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Tammy,

I was editing this post and hit delete instead of edit. It's been awhile since I originally posted. I had a couple of sugs for lyric tweaks, but not sure exactly what they were. I know that my main point was that I liked this melody a lot and that your vocals reminded me of Janis Joplin without the "gravelly" voice. Would love to hear this song with a serious production!

steady-eddie.

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#1034813 - 01/04/14 04:20 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: E Swartz]  
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M.

I must admit I am very happy with this write, thank you my friend for seeing it the way that I do.

Tammy


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#1034814 - 01/04/14 04:22 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Dan,

I understand your point, but my purpose in the chorus was only to point out why the night wasn't as good as the day, it is the time for goodbye's. But can see where that confusion might be for folks.

Thanks for taking a good look at this Dan.

Tammy


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#1034815 - 01/04/14 04:23 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Michael,

I am sure you are happy to see me do something upbeat, I am usually slow and depressing huh??? LOL!! Well, I agree my friend...thanks for listening!

Tammy


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#1034816 - 01/04/14 04:36 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Hi Tammy,

Your voice has that kind of quality which makes any words you sing sound incredibly deep and meaningful! So when I read these light and romantic words I KNEW that they'd be infused with a great dose of Deep Tammy -- and they were! The effect is lovely!

Lisa

#1034837 - 01/04/14 08:02 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: Lisa Gundling]  
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#1035177 - 01/07/14 02:25 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: Calvin]  
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Floyd,

I'm learning as many instruments as I can sir!! LOL! yes, drums are always a great addition for sure, thanks...I find myself cooking lots, sadly it is mostly dinner....LOL!

Tammy


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#1035208 - 01/07/14 01:46 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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*facepalm*.......dang soundclick just won't play for me, and I'm done trying to figure it out.

#1035210 - 01/07/14 02:24 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: maccharles]  
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If anyone is having trouble with SoundClick...there is a reverbnation link under my signature in my posts above where it is also posted and it is also on Soundcloud...dont' give up on me.....LOL!!

https://soundcloud.com/tamsnumber4/cant-wait-til-the-morning


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#1035224 - 01/07/14 04:26 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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wow, I was totally taken by surprise with the music. Having read the lyrics prior to finally hearing it, I expected something a bit slower and folkier.......I like everything about this, your vocals just keep getting better.

my only nit would be the chorus, I wouldn't really realize it was a chorus unless I was reading along and saw it noted.

well done overall.

#1035400 - 01/09/14 12:10 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: maccharles]  
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Eddie,

I had read your lyric ideas and I appreciate the time you took to come up with it. I didn't feel that they really fit into the line without being rushed and seemed to get too descriptive for me, but I know what you are getting at, but the words flow within the music without being rushed at this point and I'm happy with that, but thank you ever so much, you know I always look forward to your suggestions...I really do...and about Janis....I WISH!! I love her and have her best of cd, I never try to be her, but hey, if you got that vibe...that is a great name to jot down ANYTIME!! LOL!! My guitar teacher is too busy to gather friends for a serious production of this, he is ready to move on....sigh...what's a girl to do....

Tammy


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#1035442 - 01/09/14 11:19 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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I want to see you REALLY GROWL...get bluesy....I don't read other posts (if at all) UNLESS I hear the song first...it's good practice for us all..... But if someone didn't already suggest to you to "dirty" those vox up and really pour some good down n dirty angst in there, I'd be surprised. You may think the lyrics are too sweet to dirty up a bit but that's the twist that I see happening here. This is a wonderful song and you stick the vox, but TURN UP THE VOX IN THE MIX and get nasty. Put some fine cracklin in there...I already hear glimpses of Janis.....now piss her off.

This is a good song. Well done, Tammy.


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#1035579 - 01/10/14 01:54 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: Michael W. Brown]  
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Lisa,

Glad you liked it, thanks for always listening!

Tammy


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#1035581 - 01/10/14 01:54 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Calvin,

Why thank you, I might need a cold shower....LOL!! Appreciate the listen!!

Tammy


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#1035582 - 01/10/14 02:02 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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I have to agree with Dan. There are some serious time-of-day disconnects in your story line.
There is some really nice imagery in this lyric, but the progression of events confused me.


I love words. They say so much.

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#1035590 - 01/10/14 03:24 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: Kurt Fortmeyer]  
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I like this style for you but the vocals should be more out front to show it off. Yeah, and maybe a touch more growlly. Lyrically, I'm not confused but I've been accused of being too abstract, like that's a bad thing, so I'm not sure if that's good or bad for you. It works for me. smile

Ricki

#1035628 - 01/10/14 07:43 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
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I'm with Ricki on this one about getting the sequence of events. It is all perspective, whether you want to interpret the song literally (in a temporal sense) or whether you want to let the song take you on a journey. The mix was an attempt to find the best levels to showcase the vocals AND the guitar. They are both stellar in my opinion. Bringing the vocal more forward in the mix overshadows some very nice subtle guitar work which would not sit very well for some.

I have a lot of favorites that Tammy has done and this one rates right up there with the best.

It was a pleasure for me to be able to stitch this one together.

Danny


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Mr. MacCharles,

As a fan of yours, I'm just happy you stopped by for any reason, I am very happy you enjoyed it and yes,...the chorus was pointed out to me and I do have a way to fix it, but I'm afraid that my co-writer wants to leave it be for now. But I do understand what you are saying. Thanks!

Tammy


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#1035678 - 01/11/14 12:56 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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I believe this is my first listen to one of your songs Tammy. I agree with the Janis Joplin vibe. But I could see this rearranged as country ala Judds(either one - whoops there's 3 - not the actress though). Sounds like you had fun doing it. I sure enjoyed listening to it.

#1035823 - 01/12/14 01:18 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: summeoyo]  
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Great job on the lyric and vocal, Tammy

Bill


#1036029 - 01/14/14 05:48 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: Bill Osofsky]  
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Mike,

You crack me up, not so sure I'm a growling kinda girl, I do know what you mean, I can try stuff like that out, but my 30 years in choirs taught me to sing differently, there was no growling in the chorus...LOL!! I'll see what I can do....

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#1036502 - 01/19/14 12:30 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Kurt,

Appreciate the listen and your comments.

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#1036503 - 01/19/14 12:31 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Ricki,

So happy to see you again and thank you for giving this a listen!! Glad you liked it!

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#1036504 - 01/19/14 12:32 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Summeoyo,

Yes, I do sing country a lot and could see where my vocal might send you that way for sure. Thanks for listening!

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#1036505 - 01/19/14 12:33 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Bill,

Thanks for giving this one a listen, had fun doing it!!

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#1036634 - 01/19/14 09:09 PM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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bumping to show new video


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#1036678 - 01/20/14 08:15 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Hi Tam,

Yep you nailed it. whistle I absolutely love the lyrics of this, the music, and you sing it so beautifully. smile

Well done girl, I'm impressed how much you've grown. Congratulations. I'm a Fan!

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#1036752 - 01/21/14 01:30 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins [Re: Michele Howlett]  
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That is a fine write and a great vocal! The chorus is fantastic -- wonderful imagery. We're on board and hope to hear more!


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Really fine video for a lovely song Tammy!Mike

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Wonderful lyric and I really like the musical aspect of the song. Very catchy, Tammy.

Stevie

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Nice one Tammy.
It drives along a pace and the vocal is good.
My suggestion would be to add a harmony in the chorus.
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Michele,

So happy to see you again girl and glad you liked this one!! I'm trying to improve....never give up!!! LOL!!

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Janice and Bud,

So happy you like the lyric and the song, I really appreciate you saying so!!

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#1037477 - 01/28/14 11:50 AM Re: Can't Wait 'Til The Morning Begins New Video Added [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Hey Tammy,
don't change anything wink
This one's really great, so much so I'm going back to it right away!
And yes, your voice can't leave us cold, so that's a pleasing addition to an already super song. Well done on the video job as well!

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Michael,

Thanks for the listen, glad you liked it!!

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Stevie B,

Always glad to get your take on a song, so happy this one sits nicely with you!

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