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sorry to post another song so soon. Just that I'm feeling nostalgic tonight, and I had a couple of discussion about other songs/lyrics on the board today that reminded me of this. The singer is Dave Brooks, I did a lot of my demos, and cut this song on his own CD.

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=6278992&q=hi

SHE'S FORGOTTEN BY NOW

(verse)
A quarter moon, a Dallas sky
Orion on the rise
A hint of lilac on her neck
And love was in our eyes
Some good Kentucky bourbon
Made everything feel right
And though I'd known her just a month
The world was ours that night

(prechorus)
We spent about a year together
Then things jsut fell apart
She walked herself out of my life
But she's still in my heart

(chorus)
Each day I remind myself
It's time that I let it go
But I still think of her
When I'm lyin' here alone
Every time I start to feel like
I'll get by somehow
I'm haunted by those memories
That she's forgotten by now

(verse)
Was I too blind, was she too young?
It doesn't pay to blame
No matter how two people try
They can never love the same
Freedom held her tighter than
I could ever do
She promised we'd work things out
I knew it wasn't true

(prechorus)
It wasn't getting any better
And any fool could see
As much as that girl meant to me
It wasn't meant to be

(repeat chorus)

Bill Osofsky, Eden Langworthy copyright


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well written & a real smooth performance too.

this part is nice----

Freedom held her tighter than
I could ever do



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Mighty Fine Write/& Demo, Brother Bill!

Think Hook'd be smoother & even a bit More-Country if it was simply "She's Forgot By Now"--KOS. (Delete "That" too, I'll add.)

Good Luck with a Good, Sad One, Amigo!

Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
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Bill,

Loved it. A really solid write!

An all-out Garth sound/feel to both the melody and production of the demo. Perfect singer for this one...

What country radio needs to return to sounding like...

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Hey Bill,

This is powerful. Great performance/production/arrangement!

No nits here, loved this melody, and arrangement flow. Super write!

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Top notch Bill!i liked this one a lot,some really good lines and the singer is perfect for this one.Mike

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Not much to add to what was already said here: very smooth, flows well, everything fits together, great vocals, solid arrangement and performance. This type of song doesn't get much better. :-)

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Really, really good. Lyrics are fine and the music is four stars (****)!

Good concept, good execution.

You can be proud of this one!

Dave smile

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Originally Posted by Calvin
well written & a real smooth performance too.

this part is nice----

Freedom held her tighter than
I could ever do


Calvin

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

Thank you, Calvin. Appreciate you taking the time

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Originally Posted by "Tampa Stan" Good
Mighty Fine Write/& Demo, Brother Bill!

Think Hook'd be smoother & even a bit More-Country if it was simply "She's Forgot By Now"--KOS. (Delete "That" too, I'll add.)

Good Luck with a Good, Sad One, Amigo!

Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan


Thank you, original Tampa guy. Appreciate the listen and suggestion.

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Originally Posted by floyd jane
Bill,

Loved it. A really solid write!

An all-out Garth sound/feel to both the melody and production of the demo. Perfect singer for this one...

What country radio needs to return to sounding like...

floyd


Thanks, other Tampa guy. I thought you might like it smile Eden was pretty friendly with Joe Diffie, but I don't think he ever got a cut with him

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Hi Bill,

This is beautifully done - it sounds great! My son walked in while I was listening and he gave an unsolicited comment -- "it's really good." (After asking whether it was a true story -- lol!)

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Hey Bill,

Great production mate, can't beat the vocals and musical arrangement. Simple and clear.

As for the song itself and the lyrics ? I've listened a couple of times, and I'm missing the hook, both lyrically and melodically.

Perhaps it's because of it's generic nature, or lack of story line ?, or what it's NOT saying ?

It's a "Ok but no cigar" from me, but I did enjoy the listen anyways.

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Originally Posted by Bill Osofsky
sorry to post another song so soon. Just that I'm feeling nostalgic tonight, and I had a couple of discussion about other songs/lyrics on the board today that reminded me of this. The singer is Dave Brooks, I did a lot of my demos, and cut this song on his own CD.

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=6278992&q=hi

SHE'S FORGOTTEN BY NOW

(verse)
A quarter moon, a Dallas sky
Orion on the rise
A hint of lilac on her neck
And love was in our eyes
Some good Kentucky bourbon
Made everything feel right
And though I'd known her just a month
The world was ours that night

(prechorus)
We spent about a year together
Then things jsut fell apart
She walked herself out of my life
But she's still in my heart

(chorus)
Each day I remind myself
It's time that I let it go
But I still think of her
When I'm lyin' here alone
Every time I start to feel like
I'll get by somehow
I'm haunted by those memories
That she's forgotten by now

(verse)
Was I too blind, was she too young?
It doesn't pay to blame
No matter how two people try
They can never love the same
Freedom held her tighter than
I could ever do
She promised we'd work things out
I knew it wasn't true

(prechorus)
It wasn't getting any better
And any fool could see
As much as that girl meant to me
It wasn't meant to be

(repeat chorus)

Bill Osofsky, Eden Langworthy copyright


You had to go and remind me, I had her forgotten and now this. Thanks Bill. LOL

Pretty cool tune.

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Originally Posted by E Swartz
Hey Bill,

This is powerful. Great performance/production/arrangement!

No nits here, loved this melody, and arrangement flow. Super write!

steady-eddie


Thanks so much, Eddie. Appreciate it.

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Originally Posted by Michael LeBlanc
Top notch Bill!i liked this one a lot,some really good lines and the singer is perfect for this one.Mike


Thanks for the listen, Mike smile

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Beautiful tune. Thanks for the listen.

Regards,

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BILL AND EDEN--

THIS IS ABOUT AS GOOD AS A REAL COUNTRY SONG CAN BE--AND THERE ARE NO PICKUP TRUCKS OR JOHN DEER TRACTORS!

I LOVE IT!

GOOD LUCK WITH IT!

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very very beutiful song. and the singer is superb

God Bless Royand Helen


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What a beautiful song, and the music, lyrics and singing are top-notch.

I haven't been in here for ages (sorry, too busy with shows and new projects) and thought I'd check to see what was cooking....Looks like I won big-time today.


my music here: http://www.beatdeck.com/RaggyProject

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Originally Posted by McLight
Not much to add to what was already said here: very smooth, flows well, everything fits together, great vocals, solid arrangement and performance. This type of song doesn't get much better. :-)


Nice to meet ya, Charlie. Thanks for stopping by

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Originally Posted by Dave Whitehead
Really, really good. Lyrics are fine and the music is four stars (****)!

Good concept, good execution.

You can be proud of this one!

Dave smile


Thanks, DAve. It's one of my favorites


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Originally Posted by Lisa Gundling
Hi Bill,

This is beautifully done - it sounds great! My son walked in while I was listening and he gave an unsolicited comment -- "it's really good." (After asking whether it was a true story -- lol!)

Lisa


That's really nice, Lisa. I wouldn't think this is something a teenager would enjoy, especially a Beltway kid, lol. Please assure him that no feelings were hurt in the making of this song, the story is totally fabricated. I don't even know what Orion on the rise actually means,lol.

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Originally Posted by niteshift
Hey Bill,

Great production mate, can't beat the vocals and musical arrangement. Simple and clear.

As for the song itself and the lyrics ? I've listened a couple of times, and I'm missing the hook, both lyrically and melodically.

Perhaps it's because of it's generic nature, or lack of story line ?, or what it's NOT saying ?

It's a "Ok but no cigar" from me, but I did enjoy the listen anyways.

cheers, niteshift


Thanks, Geoff. Appreciate your thoughts on it. I look for something hookier for the next one smile

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Originally Posted by Bugsey
Originally Posted by Bill Osofsky
sorry to post another song so soon. Just that I'm feeling nostalgic tonight, and I had a couple of discussion about other songs/lyrics on the board today that reminded me of this. The singer is Dave Brooks, I did a lot of my demos, and cut this song on his own CD.

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=6278992&q=hi

SHE'S FORGOTTEN BY NOW

(verse)
A quarter moon, a Dallas sky
Orion on the rise
A hint of lilac on her neck
And love was in our eyes
Some good Kentucky bourbon
Made everything feel right
And though I'd known her just a month
The world was ours that night

(prechorus)
We spent about a year together
Then things jsut fell apart
She walked herself out of my life
But she's still in my heart

(chorus)
Each day I remind myself
It's time that I let it go
But I still think of her
When I'm lyin' here alone
Every time I start to feel like
I'll get by somehow
I'm haunted by those memories
That she's forgotten by now

(verse)
Was I too blind, was she too young?
It doesn't pay to blame
No matter how two people try
They can never love the same
Freedom held her tighter than
I could ever do
She promised we'd work things out
I knew it wasn't true

(prechorus)
It wasn't getting any better
And any fool could see
As much as that girl meant to me
It wasn't meant to be

(repeat chorus)

Bill Osofsky, Eden Langworthy copyright


You had to go and remind me, I had her forgotten and now this. Thanks Bill. LOL

Pretty cool tune.


Thanks, Bugsey. Been missing you, man. Tied up with the start of the football season?


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Hi Bill.
Really good song here and excellent production.
Just one teeny nit: I think it would help if you cut "That" from the end of the chorus.
Vic

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Originally Posted by 90 dB
Beautiful tune. Thanks for the listen.

Regards,

Bob


Thanks, Bob. Appreciate it

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Originally Posted by Mackie H.
BILL AND EDEN--

THIS IS ABOUT AS GOOD AS A REAL COUNTRY SONG CAN BE--AND THERE ARE NO PICKUP TRUCKS OR JOHN DEER TRACTORS!

I LOVE IT!

GOOD LUCK WITH IT!

Mackie


I don't remember doing any John Deeres, but I will admit to pickup trucks, lol. Just not in this one. Thanks, Mackie

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Originally Posted by Roy Cooper
very very beutiful song. and the singer is superb

God Bless Royand Helen


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Originally Posted by Raggy
What a beautiful song, and the music, lyrics and singing are top-notch.

I haven't been in here for ages (sorry, too busy with shows and new projects) and thought I'd check to see what was cooking....Looks like I won big-time today.


Welcome back, Raggy. Glad you liked it

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Originally Posted by Vicarn
Hi Bill.
Really good song here and excellent production.
Just one teeny nit: I think it would help if you cut "That" from the end of the chorus.
Vic


Thanks, Vic. That's the second vote for "that", so I guess that's that

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I’m listening thinking wow, top notch demo, sounding really good. Loving it! I couldn’t help thinking though, man I’ve heard that vocalist before, just didn’t know where. Then I saw Dave’s name and realized he’s sung on four of my demos! I knew he sounded familiar! Nice choice.

Great song, nicely done.

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Here, here!!.....I have to agree, with everyone else, that this is a stellar demo, and a stellar song!!
What a great production.....it's marvelous.
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Originally Posted by Iggy
I’m listening thinking wow, top notch demo, sounding really good. Loving it! I couldn’t help thinking though, man I’ve heard that vocalist before, just didn’t know where. Then I saw Dave’s name and realized he’s sung on four of my demos! I knew he sounded familiar! Nice choice.

Great song, nicely done.


Thanks, Iggy. I guess Dave was pretty hot there for a while. I don't know if it's continued the last 5 years


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Originally Posted by Cognac
Here, here!!.....I have to agree, with everyone else, that this is a stellar demo, and a stellar song!!
What a great production.....it's marvelous.
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Thanks so much, Tom.

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Hi Bill,

Great song, solid for an album cut. Good work!

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Thanks, Karen. If I ever have an album, I'll put it in the running smile

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Beautiful heart song Bill.

Love it.


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Originally Posted by JosieB
Beautiful heart song Bill.

Love it.


Thanks, Josie. Good to see you

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"Freedom held her tighter than I could ever do"

Great lyrics and the above line is a primo keeper in my book.


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Thanks, Jan/Bud. So nice of you to stop by

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Hey Bill- really loved this. Could hear Garth Brooks in the writing and recording. Sweet and smooth- Great Job!!!!!

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Sweet Ballad.....

Gets you right in the belly here...gut wrencher....

This is very cuttable..


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Originally Posted by bobbyearlray
Hey Bill- really loved this. Could hear Garth Brooks in the writing and recording. Sweet and smooth- Great Job!!!!!


Thanks, Bobby Earl. Appreciate the listen

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Originally Posted by Steve Altonian
Sweet Ballad.....

Gets you right in the belly here...gut wrencher....

This is very cuttable..



Thanks a bunch, Steve

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Sounding good, Bill. I'm not into Country but I know how it should sound and this is as good as anything I hear on the radio.

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Originally Posted by Little_stevie_b
Sounding good, Bill. I'm not into Country but I know how it should sound and this is as good as anything I hear on the radio.

Stevie


Thanks, Stevie. Sorry I missed your comment. Appreciate you stopping by

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