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I submitted this title once before, over a different lyric entirely, but now I think that I have completed two pieces that have been in my head........at once. I also submitted a piece entitled, "Temporary Girlfriend" before........this one ties it all up. I just needed to come up with something that would enable me to use the (now completed) "I Smell Blood" chorus/refrain, while finally putting my thoughts down concerning how I really felt about her, all together. All comments appreciated.
I SMELL BLOOD
for Cathy Duz
Lopsided astrological chart
Does nothing at all for me
I'll tell you what splits people apart
It’s what they refuse to see
Hard to trust when given fear
Outcast seems to fit me well
No friends, just insecurity here
I guess it's just as well
I smell blood in the water, I smell blood in the air
I smell blood when you look at me with your eyes so full of fear
A word of sound advice, and as far as I'm concerned
Soon come a day when all you need is all you never learned
Maybe the problem really is just me
Something lost concerning friends
I've heard all about your reality
To the bitter bloody end
I did as well as I knew how to do
Nothing more to expect from me
I never won anything, neither did you
It's about what we refused to see
I smell blood in the water, I smell blood in the air
I smell blood when you look at me with your eyes so full of fear
A word of sound advice, and as far as I'm concerned
Soon come a day when all you need is all you never learned
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Sam, ther's no link to your song?? Scotty
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Just a lyric, that's what I do, I write.
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