Hay Kevin and Roy,
Heckuva' job
Loved it--Flowed nicely.
The only place I stumbled on a couple read throughs was I wanted the C to read thusly_

I ain’t going back to Mexico
That's a natural fact ALL RIGHT
I don't want to die down there
For whatever happened. that night
Maria and Consuelo
whoever you are……. I apologize
but these tattoo's tell me all I need to know
and I ain't going back to Mexico

Write on