Pretty good demo, everything sounds pretty good. The "chorus first" versus "verse first" is always an ongoing battle. Basically, you should have the chorus first a) if the chorus is fairly short or b) you want to add variety to your "portfolio". Sometimes having the chorus first is just a fun way to go.

In this case, I would vote for verse first.

Kevin


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