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#546130 - 10/03/07 11:23 AM
Re: Ande's Lyric Writing Tips
[Re: Mike Caro Substudio]
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Aaron Authier
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I know some people like the whole package but a weak lyric to me (And yes I do hear words not just music) Isn't a full package
Seems to be me but I can't back a lyric that says:
I'm waiting for your memory to fade
I'm still holding onto the promises you made
You said you felt for me
A love that would always be
All he forgot to leave out was "I'd die for you"
Substudio there is a difference between a clever song you hear on the radio and a song with recycled lines and words, that both say the same thing, I wonder what this falls under
I've wasted enough time on this which I can't believe I have
Peace
Last edited by airun; 10/03/07 11:27 AM.
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