Originally Posted by Gary E. Andrews
That works Guy! Merci!
I wonder about the 'face' Line if it might be better if the Singer-Character says:
"I want to see the look on your face!"
That makes it about her, the Love-Interest Character.



I may just replace 'on our face' with 'on your face'
or change the line for
See that fine look /on your face /

I can imagine Michael Bublé performing this song...

Merry Christmas!