Hi Craig,
You tell this story well, and I think it's a good write. Personally, I would love to see something in there that tells the parents side a little too. I see so many children today growing up with no discipline and no rules at all, and see what the results are out on the streets. Yes, there have to be lines parents should not cross, but i had my butt beat every time I was bad and I am no worse, and I think better for it.

Have a goodun,

John W. Selleck BMI Songwriter
A day without learning is a day lost forever.

https://www.soundclick.com/artist/default.cfm?bandID=1468958 For Selleck/Kay co-writes