Irwin,

I would say it has a pop feel to it . . . for me at least. No suggestions on the arrangement per se. Without a vocal on top of it the song gets a bit repetitious--needs a change up perhaps earlier on if it's going to stand as an instrumental . . . But that may just be me. Instrumentals are always challenging for me to judge because typically they are not my favorite thing to listen to. Lot of potential in this one, though. Thanks for sharing.

Regards,

Deej