Gavin,

First off, it’s a terrific write . . . some killer lines from first to last. I think you’ve gotten some good feedback regarding the feedback voice. It’s not distinctive enough on this go-sround. My instinct is to go with a more “radio tube” type sound. Easier said than done . . . but I love the tune—just needs that clear differentiation to put it over the top.

Lot to like about this one!

Regards,

Deej