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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Bob,
I really enjoyed your song, great lyrics, along with nice vocals that fit perfectly with this music. Not a nit, but IMO, what could be improved is the solo--I feel it's a little too "vanilla." I get that it conveys a lonely vibe, which is cool. But in my mind the song in general expresses that well enough, and I think the solo could use more instrumentation to build more of a crescendo at this juncture--in other words more cinematic! Then following the solo, it might be cool to insert a lifting key change for the latter part of the song giving a more building movement. Just what I'm hearing in my head, and just "food for thought."
Beautiful write as is however, and I sincerely enjoyed your performance, melody, and lyrics.
steady-eddie Eddie, Thanks for the listen and the suggestion. Regards, Bob
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