Hi Mike,

So much imagery in these lines! Really quite lovely. The line with "soon" in that last verse may need a rethink to make it conversational. But the emotion is all there and you repeat the hook to drive home the empty, lonely feelings. Really well-written!

Kristi


A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist