Thanks for the comment, Travis. Yeah, perhaps more poetic than you'd expect from a lyric; though somewhat representative of some of my older efforts. As I turn from writing poems to writing songs again, I'm trying to keep things more accessible.

As to this one, it's not a tune I'd likely record and share; like most of what I have written to date, I don't think musically it clearly fits any genre, and so it likely wouldn't appeal to most. The fun for me in writing songs and lyrics, though, is stringing some nice lines together--kinda like putting the pieces of a 1000 piece puzzle together, you know. Maybe it works, or not. But I do like a lot of the lines on this one, for what it is lyrically (and, yeah, poetically), and it's in that spirit I share.

Thanks much for the read and the feedback.