Travis,

I love the first line of the chorus--it sets a lot up. But for what it's worth, on this one, I'm just not feeling a connection between the verses and the chorus--that is, e.g. Maggie comes out of nowhere in the chorus from the first two verses, so the line doesn't resonate as it deserves to. Perhaps reshape the verses to focus on why, regardless of what's going on, it's "grand to hold Maggie's hand". Not sure that makes sense, but for what it's worth.

All the best,

Deej