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Living
by Irwin. 05/20/18 04:51 PM
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The key
by John Lawrence Schick. 05/19/18 01:33 PM
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That Song
by the_lyricwriter. 05/19/18 09:06 AM
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1 hour ago
Originally Posted by Rick HeenanOur ranks may be shrinking but I'll bet our total weight is up. I went on a carb diet and lost like 25 lbs. I miss chips....
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lots of good lines... I feel the emotion...a long way to the chorus Cleaning Day.( Female vocal perhaps) v I closed my eyes when you flirt clutched my heart where it hurts When you left then came back again tried not to think where you'd been v I fooled myself put a smile here...
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Yesterday at 09:23 PM
Greetings JPF Community. We have had some excellent tunes floated our way! The reviewers have scored the submitted songs and we have indeed selected a song for our Phase I Proof of Concept Project. We are waiting until the songwriter reviews and signs off on our single song agre...
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Yesterday at 05:00 PM
Really nice, fallendiva. Well metered, too. ...
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Yesterday at 04:40 PM
a long way to the chorus and hook. Thin it out, and focus on one thing that made it special/ most memorable I'd start by dropping V2 ...
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Yesterday at 04:32 PM
Wowsa! Great figurative language! It's a bleak story, but well done. The last lunch punches a pretty big wallop, so I wonder if just repeating the line "a cheap room I can hide in" instead would be more subtle and less overwhelming. Keep it up and keep posting - I'...
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Yesterday at 02:30 PM
Originally Posted by IrwinHi Tom, I always enjoy your compositions and this just another one I like. Sometimes I wonder, aren't you guys not publish songwriters as yet, and why. This confuses me. Thank Irwin for the generous comments. As far as becoming money making "publi...
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Yesterday at 02:27 PM
Hey there Irwin...……..Has that Jazzy kinda structure...…..keeps us wondering where it will go. Always fun...………..Kudos! ;-) -Tom...
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Yesterday at 12:59 PM
Sorry I'm late... again, Deej: When you "experiment" I suspect you had a good idea of exactly where this song is headed! Great work with BIAB and I really like the vibe you have created. Best of luck with "Sweet Lorelei!" ----Dave...
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05/20/18 10:28 PM
Not bad. The mix definitely needs work. The rhythm guitar playing the arpeggios is too loud and the vocals are nowhere near loud enough compared to the instruments. And Gilmore's guitar has a thicker more mid-range sound. On the right track though........
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05/20/18 09:52 PM
Dawn Upon the Distant Waves ©2018 Robert George BMI People in that fishing village say her name was “Dawn” And they say he’d mourn her death eternally So maybe it was madness painting that mirage Of a woman walking ev’ry morning on the sea O he used to go down by the ocean A...
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05/20/18 08:51 PM
Originally Posted by the_lyricwriterNice little Jam enjoyed the vibe thanks Anthony Hi Anthony, You said you enjoyed the vibe and I am glad you did. Thanks for clicking on my post to have a listen. I appreciate. Irwin...
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05/20/18 06:54 PM
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13728572 Feeling Free (Neil Cotton) [C]I’ve seen it a few times [F] in a farmer’s field A [C]gate was left open the [G]horses squealed The [F]sod flew as they [G]kicked up their [C]heels I [C]recall the joy of [F]passing grade 2 and[C]t...
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05/20/18 06:44 PM
I like this Val i'm a big Fairport Convention fan and this reminded me of their earlu output. Good song Travis...
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05/20/18 03:42 PM
Very nicely written DJ. Poetic and sad. Vic...
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05/20/18 03:15 PM
Originally Posted by Deej56Neil, Again, I like the lyrics here and you have the core of a good tune going on here. I'm the last to ask for production suggestions, but as I listened I was wondering what this would sound like slightly more uptempo. Not sure how easy that would b...
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05/20/18 02:08 AM
Frank N Furter, This is nicely done; though short, it's still emanates emotion; bittersweet. Enjoyed the read. Kind regards, Deej...
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05/19/18 05:33 PM
Glad I was helpful Irwin! Best, John :")...
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05/19/18 03:00 PM
I wrote this following a news story about someone dealing with the abduction of a daughter. Generalized it to make it apply to many different worrisome situations. WHEN WORRIES GO HAYWIRE c2018 Brian Beecher When worries go haywire I experience Deep grief on all levels It’s ...
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05/19/18 02:07 PM
I'll take a look at this. Thanks for the look-see....
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05/19/18 01:57 PM
Originally Posted by Ricki E. BellosWow, Irwin, thanks so much for that awesome review. My head is so big now I can barely get through the doorway! Thanks for listening. Ricki Yes Ricki, What I'd said, I really meant it. Just want you to know. I don't say this to persons too o...
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05/19/18 01:06 PM
Thanks for all the great feedback Anthony...
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05/19/18 03:30 AM
Rikki, Howdy! Thanks for the spin and the kind words. I did indeed consider making the song more attacking towards Massey Energy for perceived and actual neglect. There were law suits and settlements to families from what I understand. But I didn't feel that my purpose was...
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05/19/18 02:26 AM
Originally Posted by Travis davidGreat tribute Roy. Best Wishes John Thanks John your words are appreciated God Bless from me and Helen...
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05/18/18 03:49 PM
might change V3..*** Feeling Free (Neil Cotton) I’ve seen it a few times in a farmer’s field A gate left open and the horses squealed The sod flew as they kicked up their heels It seems like forever since I finished grade 2 And that excitement of the last day of school....
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